Jezebel, this is a beautiful, and beautifully wrought story. You reveal the heart of each character tenderly and respectully, drawing back layers of experience and of compassion for each other's experience. There is poetry in that revelation. I cannot wait to enjoy more of your work.
I always thought that behind you intelligent eyes there was a very intelligent mind. You should write daily and let your fans see what you are capable of. This story was very well written and I enjoyed every word. In the words of Bob Dylan you have to just “keep on keeping on.
Jezebel, this is a beautiful, and beautifully wrought story. You reveal the heart of each character tenderly and respectully, drawing back layers of experience and of compassion for each other's experience. There is poetry in that revelation. I cannot wait to enjoy more of your work.
Powerful.
I always thought that behind you intelligent eyes there was a very intelligent mind. You should write daily and let your fans see what you are capable of. This story was very well written and I enjoyed every word. In the words of Bob Dylan you have to just “keep on keeping on.
Nice beginning . Would love to see where this story takes me
Thank you for the kind comment! I was so intrigued by the characters.
This was an amazing piece to read. Thank you for sharing